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Wrath of Caan: Prologue

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Prologue

Caan, preset the coordinates while the Doctor talked
about offering his help. “Emergency Temporal Shift”, Caan
screeched, disappearing before the Doctor could do
anything about it.

On the stage Sec woke, groaning as he sat up, looking
rotten. “What happened?” said Sec rubbing the back of his
sore head. After a few seconds he remembered what he
did earlier. He got up a bit unsteadily. He didn't want to
stick around too long. He turned to head for the nearest
exit, when Caan appeared right in front of his eye. Sec
tried to make a run for it, but Caan was to quick for him.
Caan aimed his weapon and fired. Sec collapsed on the
stage again out cold. Caan glided over to him. “I knew you
wouldn't give your life for the Doctor without having a plan
first”, Caan sneered at Sec. Caan opened his casing and
used one of his tentacles to search Sec for something.
“Ah there it is” removing Sec's device that was on his wrist.  
“You used your force-field generator to absorb Thay's gun shot?” “Very clever Sec”, said Caan studying the device very carefully, then chucked it away.  “I can't let you have that. Some weak brother Thay turned out to be”, Caan jeered, grabbing Sec and pulled him inside his casing. “Emergency Temporal Shift” said Caan again disappearing a few seconds later.

When Caan remateralized it was night and he was on a
coast looking out to sea. “Oh just great!”, sighed Caan
looking up and down the coast. “In the middle of no
where!” “When will my bad luck end!” screamed Caan.
Caan turned around and saw a big building, now in front of
him. “A shopping centre?” “Thats more like it”, Caan said,
sounding almost pleased, as he made his way towards the
building. “My plan must not and will not fail!”
The prologue of a Doctor Who fanfiction story I am doing. Please go easy on me?. First time doing this kind of thing. ^^;

All comments welcome.

Ps: I cant think of a good name for this story so I added this title "The Wrath of Caan" as a joke
and I'm open to any suggestions.
If you don't get the joke ask.

Edit: Chapter 1 is now up here:[link]
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*imargine caan going shoping now* ;-)
the story begins real nice!